directions:
write an essay of 160200 words based on the following drawing. in your essay, you should
1. describe the drawing briefly,
2. interpret its intended meaning, and then
3. give your comments.
you should write neatly on the answer sheet.
审题及提纲
图中一男人置身于许多张着嘴巴的电脑傍边，听后者侃侃而谈。这些数量巨大的电脑你一言我一语，谈论着周围世界的是对错非。它们作为大众思维发泄的途径，无疑变成网络言辞的标志。本图旨在提示我们与网络言辞之间的联络。作为网络言辞的载体，互联网已然变成信息传达活动不可以顷刻离弃的办法和方法。它给我们供给了安适宣告定见的平台。可是，凡事皆有双面性，因为网络运用者许多，不免鱼龙混杂，构成网络信息良莠不齐，然后引发一些危及社会和大众的作业。因而，考生熟行文时，可从网络言辞的利与弊两方面打开论说，并关于坏处提出相应的处置主张。
第一段：描绘图像。可在必要的细节描绘之后，点出“张着嘴的电脑”的标志意义，为下文做好烘托。
第二段：提示涵义，充分延展。首要与实际相联络，点明主题；然后指出网络言辞的利益，并辅以事例为证；继而道出网络言辞的坏处，分析其对我们日子带来的负面影响。
第三段：总结谈论。呼吁我们沉着对待网络言辞并提出可行性主张。
经典模板范文
among hundreds of computers sits a man. each computer has a big mouth open on the screen, looking like saying something to the man. apparently, the artist highlights the power of the internet public opinions.
nowadays, with the rapid development of new technologies, the internet has become a spreading platform for public opinions, where anyone can express their views. the internet liberates our thoughts. meanwhile, every single one of us is building it every single day. by means of the internet, our voices can be influential enough to facilitate solutions to certain social problems. for instance, the overwhelming attention paid to the case—sun zhigang, a young man without any identity papers, was detained by the police and died in asylum—is in favor of the victim. unfortunately, the influences of online public opinions are fatal as well. the anonymity and arbitrariness have resulted in plenty of irresponsible online behaviors, such as starting and spreading rumors, viciously slandering other people and cyber-bullying among juveniles, which leave the public deeply traumatized.
to make the best use of the internet, the freedom of online speech, i believe, should be handled with great care. or, put another way, we should stay rational and critical when making comments or reading other peoples opinions, thus rooting out the cancer of the consensus violence in web.
一位男人置身于许多电脑傍边。而每一台电脑都张大嘴巴，如同要对他倾诉啥。显着，漫画家重在偏重网络言辞的力气。
现如今，跟着新科技的快速打开，网络变成了传达公共言辞的平台。我们可以经过该平台各持己见。互联网解放了咱们的思维。与此一起，咱们每自个每一天都在推进它的前进。借
助互联网，咱们的心声也会变得非常有影响力，甚至促进某些社会疑问的处置。比方，对青年男人孙志刚因无身份证明文件而被警方拘留并在收留所内去世一事的广泛重视，就有利于受害者。意外的是，网络言辞的影响相同也是丧命的。匿名性和随意性引发了许多不担任任的网络行为，比方制造和传达谣言，歹意诋毁别人以及青少年中的网络欺负等作业。这些行为给我们带来了深痛的精力伤口。
依我之见，为了充分使用互联网，咱们大约审慎看待网络言辞安适。换言之，当咱们宣告谈论或阅览别人的观念时，应坚持理性和判别力。如此一来，才干铲除网络言辞暴力这个毒瘤。
靓词靓语
highlight v.偏重；杰出
platform n.平台；站台
by means of 凭仗于；依托；经过
facilitate v.推进；促进
overwhelming a.无量的；压倒性的
victim n.受害者；牺牲品
anonymity n.匿名；不出名字
arbitrariness n.随意性；任意性
slander v.口头诋毁；诋毁
consensus violence in web 网络言辞暴力
靓句分析
①among hundreds of computers sits a man.
本句用于引出图像中的要害人物，为下文的细节描绘做好烘托。作者选用倒装规划，将介词短语“among…”置于句首，使整个语句简练而不简略，开篇便能给阅卷者留下深化的形象。
②nowadays, with the rapid development of new technologies, the internet has become a spreading platform for public opinions, where anyone can express their views.
继一段点出“网络言辞”这一主题之后，本句进一步介绍了其呈现的背就连使一二两段过渡天然。该句先用介词短语“with…”作状语，引出网络言辞的促进要素；又
用where引导的定语从句对“platform”进行弥补阐明，丰厚句意的一起，体现出作者不俗的言语表达才能。
③for instance, the overwhelming attention paid to the case—sun zhigang, a young man without any identity papers, was detained by the police and died in asylum—is in favor of the victim.
本句可用于举例证明。作者引证孙志刚的事例，力证了前文的“…facilitate solutions to certain social problems”这一观念。句中，破折号引出的语句作刺进语，胪陈了“case”中的人物、作业的缘由、经过及成果；一起，名词短语“a young man”作“sun zhigang”的同位语，介词短语“without…”又作“a young man”的后置定语，环环相扣，使语句紧凑流通、层次清楚。
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